Pools of sadness

Pools of sadness

A Poem by BeccaB

Pools of sadness beneath happy eyes

The fear of people hearing cries

Had to tell so many lies

Had to say so many good byes


Can a new pain take away an old pain?

Can a knife take a life?


Self hated and punishement

Am I straight or am I bent?

They don't see the dirt inside

Wish there was a life guide


Can I ask and forget the past?

Can I sleep and not need to weep?

Can I kill the bloody creeps?


I come to you with fear and dread

Knowing that I have not fed

I am Satan's angel

There is no doubt

It's no use even if you shout


Tonight you will die

Yet I will remaain

Taking with me all your pain


As my fangs prick your delicate skin

You finally realise that my darkness lies within


I drink your blood as you heart beat fades

Your death has come long since made


You are destined to die

Powerless and weak

You are not the mortal that I seek


Death will never take me

Disease shall never harm

My body is a fortress

It will not soothe or calm

© 2011 BeccaB

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Visual, to the point, dark, silent and full of noise.
Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Posted 8 Years Ago

I like how cold this peom is. Very well done: You have great thought in this. The way that you remove humanity realy drives across the idea that a Vampire wrote this story.

Absolutely gorgeous.

Posted 8 Years Ago

very visual.......dark....I love dark

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 18, 2011
Last Updated on May 18, 2011



Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom

I am a special kind of person....i try to finde the posetive in everything and everyone.....my life has been terrible i have had allot of heart ace and this is what drives me to look for the best in e.. more..

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