Alone

Alone

A Poem by BeccaB

Sitting all alone

Lots to decide

 

Thinking about my life

Not a lot's right

 

But should I let it

Stop me going on...

 

Maybe yes

And maybe no

 

Either way

I'll never know

© 2011 BeccaB


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Sometimes ones gotta do the best they can on their own.
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Posted 4 Years Ago


I agree with Chris on this one. Insightful truly! The simplicity of this poem is almost crying out to let itself be heard through the loneliness. Great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Its almost a song I can hear the Pixies singing :) very nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


great ending, sums it up to a perfect point! nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the flow of this good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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TJ
Love this Becca! I like pieces of brevity bc they test the author's ability to pack much power into few words. You succeeded

Posted 8 Years Ago


^^

(I died! It's perfect!)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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BeccaB
BeccaB

Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom



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