A Poem by BeccaB

Sitting all alone

Lots to decide


Thinking about my life

Not a lot's right


But should I let it

Stop me going on...


Maybe yes

And maybe no


Either way

I'll never know

© 2011 BeccaB

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Sometimes ones gotta do the best they can on their own.
Thank you

Posted 4 Years Ago

I agree with Chris on this one. Insightful truly! The simplicity of this poem is almost crying out to let itself be heard through the loneliness. Great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Its almost a song I can hear the Pixies singing :) very nice

Posted 9 Years Ago

great ending, sums it up to a perfect point! nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love the flow of this good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Love this Becca! I like pieces of brevity bc they test the author's ability to pack much power into few words. You succeeded

Posted 9 Years Ago


(I died! It's perfect!)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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8 Reviews
Added on May 26, 2011
Last Updated on June 24, 2011
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Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom

I am a special kind of person....i try to finde the posetive in everything and life has been terrible i have had allot of heart ace and this is what drives me to look for the best in e.. more..

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