A note from my guilt

A note from my guilt

A Poem by BeccaB

Why do you come to me?

Why not the criminals


Why do you follow me with your friend fear?

Why do you make me cry so many tears?


Pleas tell me what makes me bad?

What makes you get so mad?

Leave me alone

I need to be on my own

© 2011 BeccaB

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Love the title... And the thoughts that flow out of it...
Thanks for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago

Sounds like something from a controlled relationship. For a poem it carries a lot of details- Very nice :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

amazing writing, very well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

Awesome work and excellent title.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Great Job! I think we all wonder this from time to time... It was a great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Pleas tell me what makes me bad?
*Please tell me what makes me so bad.
It wasn't asking a question ;3
Why not the criminals
*Why not the criminals?
Though that one was asking a question :P
Just a typo or two :) Anyways. For a short poem like this, you have to express everything well and make it flow, and make it a good poem.
Which you've done :)
It was an interesting poem that I enjoyed reading...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Liked this alot good write

Posted 9 Years Ago

line two needs a ?
line five: Please, change ? to .

Again, I love the hanging sentence at the end! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 26, 2011
Last Updated on June 21, 2011
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Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom

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