Crying

Crying

A Poem by BeccaB

it can come when you least expect

it can be such a beast

but it's very hard to stop

especially when it happens a lot

 

it can come when your sad, angry

or up in your room

it can come in the shower

when it's hot

or when it's cold

even when your realy old

© 2011 BeccaB


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I have a problem with men thinking it is somewhat disgraceful to cry For me it is a stronger man who touches upon his own humanity and cries for it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Crying does not discriminate...and cares not if the time is not right. And once it starts to pour...it fills our very core.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very straightforward and simple that suits the relatively short length well. Nice job. Keep up the good work yeah? ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Our emotions are hard to predict, and at times, come out of nowhere... I love your expression of this very true piece. Nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it ! A real honest, clever poem.Like all good poems I get the feeling I understand how you are.Keep writing, you have lots to offer.

Posted 7 Years Ago


absolutely true. and you have awesome style and perfect way to put it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A great poem that demonstrates a very valid point. Crying can happen when we are sad or happy. It can even occur when we are angry. I know a few people that cry when they are very angry. It's true that it can occur at anytime.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SO TRUE!

Posted 7 Years Ago


too true.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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..that foul condition that haunts us and makes vulnerable fools of us.. the wounds are in our souls and the bleeding, tears of melancholy.. .

Posted 7 Years Ago



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BeccaB
BeccaB

Darlington, County Durham, United Kingdom



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