Forest Girl

Forest Girl

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
"

This is a little strange story about a girl who lives in a forest,No one knows about this girl.

"

She lived in a forest,

A very dark place.

She left her house years ago,

There wasn't enough space.

 

She tucked herself away,

Behind the tree in the middle.

Right there is where she sat,

Writing her riddle.

 

People walked right by her,

They didn't see,

She was standing right there,

Where she'd always be.

 

The city tore down

every single tree.

Her home was gone,

She couldn't believe it.

"How could they do something so wrong?".

 

I really don't know,

Where she is today,

But I'm pretty sure,

She's okay.

Maybe one day,

I'll see her again,

But I'll search every forest,

Until then.

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
I have no idea why but this one,after i wrote it,it reminds me of my friend Kelley!
So Kelley this is for you!

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Well done, chika! ... I've just decided... I'm going to read each and every one of your poems. Well...--the ones I've yet to read, anyway. ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this is actually great. I can imagine you taking this and working it into maybe a short story or a longer work of fiction, even if it rhymes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw this is so sweet & magical. It's simple and yet tells a beautiful tale about someone who is one with nature, and who continues to survive in this environment even after it's gone. Great job! (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, Becks... This makes me go AWWWWWW, because it is alot like me and I'm glad that you wrote this, it's so pretty and I just really enjoyed reading it. It's things like this that make me really smile. Thanks for dedicating such a beautiful poem to me ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


I give you applause and applesauce!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE it! :D
It has this mystic view to it. It's very good and wonderfly written! =]
Well done!!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well we know about the forest girl now! :P It's a great poem, really sad story though. hopefully she has a nice forest to dwel in.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sounds like a fairy tale :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this story =] Very good. The only thing is, in the first stanza, I think that it would sound a lot better if you reworded "There wasn't enough space" to make it flow nicer. But great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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