Nature walk

Nature walk

A Poem by beckyflowa
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This poem is about a nature walk with a deeper meaning.

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Winter so late leaving
Autumns hanging on
Leaves stuck to my shoes
As i travel to a destination
I dont know where it is
Or how to get there
But this nature walk is bringing me along a path
I shall not go astray
Step by step
Im getting closer
Im also getting farther
Where is this leading me?

© 2015 beckyflowa


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Cute :) I liked reading this, had a little easy spark to it, fresh :) Nice, good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beckyflowa

6 Years Ago

:)thank you very much Johanna
May be it leads you to a bliss.
Nice work.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beckyflowa

6 Years Ago

:)thank you very much
zainul

6 Years Ago

:)You are most wecome
Obviously I have no idea what this means for you, but what's great about it is that you very well capture the moment. I sure the hell know what it meant to me when twice in my life I went for that walk.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beckyflowa

6 Years Ago

i apologize, i am only seeing these reviews now haha
thank you very much and i think everyone .. read more

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Added on December 5, 2013
Last Updated on January 18, 2015
Tags: Nature, leaves, trees, direction

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beckyflowa
beckyflowa

dublin, Ireland



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hello i'm becky, i use this website as mainly a store for poems i write but please do take a look and review them, feedback would be nice:) also if you have any tips on poem or short story writing, .. more..

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