Woo

My lips pressurize
    A lyrical process
A little madness at a time
    Slipper slippery stone
I achingly caress the leaves
    That weeped to me along the trail
The stoney slippery trail
    That leads to everything
Maybe a heaven thing
    Knuckles rapping
Bleeding on the door
    The gates
Where Michael bears the key
    Arch enemy
So all alone
    The air spits
Drowning the dancers
    With the sand
That pushes
    The Heavy hand on heads
Parting the sea of the dead
    The black mystery
Of sovereignty
    A little bit of pleasure
Crests over my aching bones
    A rosebeat of sap
Into the depths of my ocean
    My hope sank slowly
Lined up in a line
    Dancing on the sea bed floor
Searching for you
    And I stared
With lips that pressurize
    Woo
A lyrical process
    That causes everything
That I wanted
    To slip
Into madness one slipper slippery stone
    At a time

 

Reviews

[Adam Chambers]

I like this, it has an interesting rythm to it, and especially like the repetition of your intro stanzas at the end. That is very effective

[Karen666]

Wooo a very slippery poem. :) i like it

[Fabian G. Franklin]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOeeeeeee! Great John. Very good use of aliteration in this.