Alone- My Optimism

It's what i counter thought for escaping the pessimist in me

ALONE

alone i 'll rise

not ot fall again

but not in disguise

i 'll be a man

alone i 'll make up

for all my mistakes

alone i won't break up

i take this oath today

alone i am standing

regaining lost strength

self ammending

never to bend

no long i 'll suffer

no long i 'll break

alone i 'll get tougher

the world i 'll shake

alone i 'll make it

turn the the way round

sky is my limit

but feet still on ground

alone with raised spirits

alone i stand here

regained my lost courage

to cope with all my fear

alone i started

alone it 'll be gone

alone i 'll end this

alone it begun

Reviews

[Bowers]

very powerful, few individuals realize how powerful they are, just as one single being, youve expressed yourself well here.. great write!

[yash]

from something dark comes the light, from our weakness, emerges the strength within us.

[lovergirl]

don't know if it's a good thing to be alone in everything yet you showed in this poem that is okay and that man is brave and strong by its own so i get it , once again i loved your poem cause you write with something i still don't know what it is yet it is showed in your poems , good job

[yash]

I loved that tag,"cause you write with something i still don't know what it is yet it is showed in your poems" seriously coz this is how it is with me in real life when people try to give a statement about me or my personality, they are always in such a state of confusion just like you said. Anyways, thanks for the constructive feedback.

[lovergirl]

you're welcome and it's good to be people's mystery , so they always have to guess cause it will be boring to figure you out from the first time ;)

[yash]

and there you go again!!!..

[lovergirl]

hhh yup !! :p

[Mason]

The message being sent in this poem is palpable. The word "alone" being repeated constantly gives strength and structure to the poem, much like the strength and structure you find within yourself. This is definitely inspirational and I thank you for submitting it. I also hope that you keep these promises to yourself. Good luck.

[yash]

Strength, it does produce, if not for all then for me. Thanks mason, hope it wasn't disappointing..

[Mason]

Not at all. I liked it a lot.