I just can't take it

I just can't take it

A Poem by Regan :)
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This is the truth, this isn't just a random poem. This is how I feel. If you think this is about you then you know you did something wrong.

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You've won this battle 
But you havem't won the war
Dont you see me crying 
I can't take it anymore 
You don't understand how hurt I feel
You just sit around and laugh at 
the things I say
The things I do 
The way I feel 
I thought I could take you 
And your dirty little rumors
I thought I was strong 
But it turns out, I was very very wrong
You hit me where it hurts most 
Don't you see I just can't take it any more 
Does it make you happy 
When I seem sad 
Does it make you smile 
When I feel like crying 
Does it make you feel good 
When you talk about me 
I hope its all worth 
The way you make me feel 
But one day I hope you look back
And regret the things you did
The things you said 
The way you made me feel 
Because Youve won this battle 
But you haven't won the war
Don't you see me crying 
I cant take it anymore 
You don't understand how hurt I feel
Please
I just can't take it anymore 

© 2012 Regan :)


Author's Note

Regan :)
Okay the words battle and war are just a metaphor so dont freak out about it.....

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this is soooooooooo good! i love you regan soooooooo much! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I LOVE YOU GIANNA :)
Oh regan this is soooo good! :) Dont listen to them your better then them. LOVE YOU!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks love you toooooooo :)
Aweeeeee Regs FAntastical poem :) I love you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

:) shank you :) love yaaa :)
Nice poem! It's so sad! Youre gonna make me cry! I love you Regs

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) love you too :)
awww im sorry regan!! great poem :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Aww regan this is so sad ;( i almost cried

Posted 8 Years Ago


Regan :)

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Regan :)
Regan :)

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