Loves Fading Joy

this is a poem basically about how i felt about relationships and young love.

Loves Fading Joy

There will come a day
hen love will come and go away.
There will be a light that burns bright
For the passions that lie within.

But all those passions will turn to dust
And loves sparkle will lose its lust.
The passion you once had and you thought was love
Will wither and fly away on the wings of a turtle dove

Young love is what hurts the most
The love after months your hearts host
It dies and loves flame goes out 
No more love your heart in doubt

My heart has been scared so many times
Willing to give up and not to care
because the love I felt for you was never even really there

There will come a time
When love fades away 
And the joy of it all will wither and die away 
Loves Fading Joy
					

				

Reviews

[Rahul]

yeh, that could be a great song...but still it's a great song to me. I loved this below one phrase much
Young love is what hurts the most
The love after months your hearts host
It dies and loves flame goes out
No more love your heart in doubt....lovely and heartfelt write.
the poem's filled with reality and showed everyone's realness of life indeed. This piece's surely came from youse heart...it's a wonderful write.100/100

[twilight-dreamer-24/7]

i actually turned this into a song!!
www.youtube.com/aaronssweet247
thats the link to find it.

[Jeff Bresee]

Now this is nice. Flows well.

[Caydie Hall]

ooh this is really good. i like the flow and rhyme scheme throughout. very nice imagery too

[anthony lopez]

KRISTI IT WAS REALLY AWESOME!

[twilight-dreamer-24/7]

this is the one i like the most. cuz its veery true. comment back and tell me what you think