Loves Fading Joy

Loves Fading Joy

A Poem by twilight-dreamer-24/7
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this is a poem basically about how i felt about relationships and young love.

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Loves Fading Joy

There will come a day
hen love will come and go away.
There will be a light that burns bright
For the passions that lie within.

But all those passions will turn to dust
And loves sparkle will lose its lust.
The passion you once had and you thought was love
Will wither and fly away on the wings of a turtle dove

Young love is what hurts the most
The love after months your hearts host
It dies and loves flame goes out 
No more love your heart in doubt

My heart has been scared so many times
Willing to give up and not to care
because the love I felt for you was never even really there

There will come a time
When love fades away 
And the joy of it all will wither and die away 
Loves Fading Joy

© 2008 twilight-dreamer-24/7


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yeh, that could be a great song...but still it's a great song to me. I loved this below one phrase much
Young love is what hurts the most
The love after months your hearts host
It dies and loves flame goes out
No more love your heart in doubt....lovely and heartfelt write.
the poem's filled with reality and showed everyone's realness of life indeed. This piece's surely came from youse heart...it's a wonderful write.100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


i actually turned this into a song!!
www.youtube.com/aaronssweet247
thats the link to find it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Now this is nice. Flows well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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ooh this is really good. i like the flow and rhyme scheme throughout. very nice imagery too

Posted 10 Years Ago


KRISTI IT WAS REALLY AWESOME!

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is the one i like the most. cuz its veery true. comment back and tell me what you think

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2008

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twilight-dreamer-24/7
twilight-dreamer-24/7

Enterprise, KS



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Well hello everyone. Its nice to know there is a sight to where i can publish alll of my works. Well, some things about me are i play volleyball,s oftball, i love to read, i really love to write, i lo.. more..

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