Overload

Overload

A Poem by R.G. Bennet
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Me = eternally busy.

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The wheels in my head
How they relentlessly turn
Countless tasks! I'm spent.

© 2012 R.G. Bennet


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R.G. Bennet
My overwhelming assignments, errands, etc. have led me to compose my first haiku ever.
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haha. the haiku lends its self the the kind of breathless, overwhelming feeling the words evoke. a perfect form for such a familiar feeling!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very nice haiku! I loved it! The syllables are in perfect 5-7-5 format. This short thirteen word poem expresses overload on the human mind so very well:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Happens to the best of us! I too always used to feel burnt out at college. There's just something or the other to do at all times of the day! Well written Senryu.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Nice haiku, like the I'm spent. at the end...i am the worlds worst for having too many irons in the fire. Sometimes it cant be helped. Hang on in there! Thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I think you've probably spoken for a good percentage of us. I know I feel the same. Well worded!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on March 27, 2012
Last Updated on March 27, 2012
Tags: tired, busy, hectic, work, tasks, overwhelmed, deadlines

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R.G. Bennet
R.G. Bennet

DFW, TX



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I'm a college student who has been in love with reading and writing from a very young age. Books have always been an escape for me, my constant companions, the characters my best friends, their world .. more..

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