The Bracelet

The Bracelet

A Poem by Beregond

The bracelet around

her dainty, unblemished wrist

clinks with tiny beads.

© 2009 Beregond

Author's Note

One of my first ever attempts at haiku. I wonder, how'd I do?

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no idea what haiku is XD but i like your poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

Beautiful Haiku! Funny that this is your first Haiku piece. I wrote my first one today as well. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Simple yet beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was nice! It was really sweet, and I think that the simplicity of it worked as an advantage.
Your poem created great imagery, and conveyed a real sense of innocence and intrigue.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

terse but effective almost a senryu

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on July 20, 2009
Last Updated on July 30, 2009



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