So far from hell!

I stare at your face and wish you were mine,

 I wish we were together, we could interwine.

I  plea in my head hoping my heart will win,

You suddenl smile and I glance at my goose-bumped skin.

 

My eyes light up when you slyly wink,

And now I can't even think.

My head spins, spots appear,

I loor you near.

 

Yo hold my waist and caress my cheeks,

I 've wanted this for a million weeks.

You surround me with your lavender smell,

I am in heaven, so far from hell!

 

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

This is so romantic!! Loved it :)

[bethany cullen]

Thank you so much for that awsome review maidahl, I'll make sure to return the favour :)

[Laura Maidah]

I think the rhyme scheme is solid. It's sweet. Hell should stay away from you. And we all better stay tuned for more from you in heaven! Your writing is angelic.