LONELY HERE ON EARTH

LONELY HERE ON EARTH

A Poem by BIIKAY
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For my little brother.:')

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I often think about you

Wondering if theres truth when they say the heavens above are filled with beautiful rays of white and blue

 

I hope your looking over me

For my head is buried in a abyuss of hurt but maybe one day I'll see

That you've been my blue eyed angel soaring all around me

 

Please gently sew my heart back together so I can feel whole again

For it is severely broken as if it went through a tornato weather wind

 

I try my best to stay strong, but I cant help to think about how your gone

My thoughts take over and for a minute I have no control

I shake it off with the power from deep down in my soul

 

I cant believe your already in the next world before me

When it is my time I need you to help me get heavens key

 

I would do anything to bring you back here on earth

I would hug and squeeze you and tell you your worth

 

For now please little brother rest in peace up there

As I try to get through my lonley days wondering how this is fair

 

 

BIIKAY-

© 2012 BIIKAY


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Mia
You're a beautiful writer and you just pour out your emotions in your work and it is always a privilege to get a glimpse of your heart through your writing.
"Please gently sew my heart back together so I can feel whole again" that line really touched me!


Posted 7 Years Ago


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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

awey- THANK YOU SWEETY!! I try my best!!



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I love the way it was written and how the thoughts exploded in this work
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Posted 7 Years Ago


excellent poem

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Mia
You're a beautiful writer and you just pour out your emotions in your work and it is always a privilege to get a glimpse of your heart through your writing.
"Please gently sew my heart back together so I can feel whole again" that line really touched me!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

awey- THANK YOU SWEETY!! I try my best!!
You pasted you're heart in this piece. Really gentle but still gorgeous.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

OMG THANKS! i wrote that out of a recent experience! :)
green dreams

7 Years Ago

Aww! Hope you get over it, pretty soon.
Beautifully expressed. It was my pleasure.

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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

aw I appreciate that
:-(

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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

ughhh the pain never dies. :(
Heartwrenching and yet oh so beautiful. I too have one in heaven that looks after me and I can't believe he went before me.
You may want to take a look at some of your words here I think you meant tornado and lonely. I send you big hugs.

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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

lol! i am terrible at grammer :( thanks hun!

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