THEY SAY TIME HEALS ALL

THEY SAY TIME HEALS ALL

A Poem by BIIKAY
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MY LIL BRO IS WEIGHIING HEAVY ON MY HEART TONIGHT <3

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THEY SAY TIME HEALS ALL

JUST WONDERING WHEN AS I SIT HERE STARN AT THE WALL

MY SADDNESS AT ITS GREATEST AND MY HAPPINESS AT ITS ALL TIME SMALL

 

I FIND MYSELF REFLECTING BACK ON YOUR LIFE

IMAGING YOU HAVING A BIG FAMILY WITH A BEAUTIFUL WIFE

THEY SAY TIME HEALS ALL BUT THE PAIN IS LINGERING HEAVY IN MY HEART FEELING LIKE A STAB OF A KNIFE

 

THERES NO EMOTION TO DESCRIBE THIS LOSS OF MINE

LIFE GOES ON AND IM SUPPOSE TO WALK AROUND LOOKING LIKE IM FINE

TURNING TO MY LAST RESOLUTION IS TO BECOME NUMB, I THINK I'LL HAVE SOME WINE

 

IM NOT SURE WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF

NOTHING CAN REPLACE THIS HURT NOT LOVE, NOT HAPPINESS NOT WEALTH

IM FEELING LOW BUT FOR YOU BRO I WONT LET THIS AFFECT MY HEALTH

 

MY EMOTIONS FEEL LIKE A NEVER ENDING ROLLERCOASTER RIDING ON THE RUSTY TRACK

I GOT A TATTOO READY IN MEMORY OF YOU ITS GOING ON MY BACK

HOPEFULLY IT WILL GIVE ME SUM PIECE OF MIND, SOMETHING I LACK

 

I DONT MEAN TO CARRY ON

BUT IM TRULY SO SO HURT FROM THIS BROKEN BOND

WRITING EASES SUM PAIN

BUT MY EYES FEEL LIKE HEAVY CLOUDS FULL OF RAIN

TIME MAY HEAL BUT IM SURE ILL ALWAYS FEEL THIS PAIN

 

BIIKAY-

 

© 2012 BIIKAY


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Loss is something everyone relates to. We have all lost someone close. The older you get, the more of those people you lose. I lost my brother Ricky when I was 14, then my daughter when I was 25. It's a lot like love in that it tastes different every time we experience it. It is amazing, the different facets of pain we can know. Pain is refracting light, its hues done up in different shades of hell. The pain never changes, like your others senses, it just dulls over time. Remember others know that pain, remember we are here to share in it. Remember that we are none of us alone.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

Aww thanks honey. Im really sorry about your losses...:(. you mentioned that we all experience losse.. read more
Kenneth Compton

7 Years Ago

The figurative heart is more bone than organ. It breaks, it remodels and fuses, harder than before... read more
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

awww That is too touching. thanks for your insight and support! I love how you said when you stare i.. read more



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It's correct that time heals it all no matter how long it will take
I love this poem of yours
Keep writing 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


So deep from the heart and soul. I can't believe this happened. Seriously, Hod takes them too young. :( I know he's missed by many and he'd be happy to know how much you care about him. Life is too short... Don't understand it. You know I'm always here for you, and that'll never change!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Jolie Blossom

7 Years Ago

dont ever feel bad or apologize for the way you feel though, we all deal with stuff that affects us .. read more
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

AWW THANKS BABES!! ppl liftn me up is a great thing, and slowly helpn.and also cheeeers JIMMY! ;)
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Mia
I was told that when you lose someone your heart is filled with pain and sadness and longing and all kinds of terrible, difficult emotions. That never goes away but you meet new people and they make you smile, your heart grows a little. You fall in love and your heart grows a little, etc. So even though the hurt never goes away your heart gets bigger and filled with some happiness, which makes dealing with the loss better as time goes by. This of course annoyed me and I really wanted to tell that lady to f**k off, it’s easy to say that when you're not the one suffering. Nothing anyone says is enough or even remotely comforting. What’s even more annoying is that she was right. I was 17 when my mother died and I couldn’t think about her without breaking down and feeling s**t. I’m 22 now and I can think about her and smile because for 17 years of my life I had the most amazing mother. I still miss her every day and I suspect that will never change but I don't feel like I can't go on anymore. I hope you get to that point and I truly am sorry about your brother. I hope it’s not over stepping to say this, but I think he would be just delighted that you’re getting a tattoo in his honour and glad that you use writing to ease the pain.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

lmao wooo there killer settle down HAAAA lol I look forward to stayn in touch and enjoying your work.. read more
Mia

7 Years Ago

Lol *blush* I got carried away...me too:)
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

LMAO I THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY IF ANYTHING!
sad but awsome

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

THANK YOU MUCH!! :))
Very nicely written and said. I like what you have to say here, Nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

aww thank you! I appreciate the feedback!! I will read some of your work just gimme a few minutes ;P
Awww, I'm sure losing someone very dear to us is really painful and pretty tough for us. Just always remember, they maybe gone but they will always have a special place in our hearts, and don't forget that there are still a lot of people around us who care and love us too. Yes, in time it will heal but for how long? I think no one knows. :) Anyways, this is a pretty piece and very well expressed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

aww thats soo cute! grandmas are always the sweetest lil pumpkins on earth. OOOh dont get wrong ide.. read more
Geraldine

7 Years Ago

Oh yes, they are. ^^ Oh of course it's not. I'm just sharing my own experience though.
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

thank you for sharing!! I appreciate it sweety!:))
Ouch i can relate to this piece a lot. and ur also from Ohio. and that hurts a lot for me. My ex from Ohio has clearly moved on...but she wanted to keep in touch and I felt like fool for keeping in touch with her. I only felt heart break and longing when I talked to her.....i felt like shes doing a sick game in keeping in touch with me which clearly shes moved on with someone else. So I had to block her on facebook and her friends and family. I cant take it. if she contacts me ONE more time. ill tell her to leave me alone forever.

great piece so sad but true. but we must move on in order to find true love and to find someone who appreciates us :P

Posted 7 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

7 Years Ago

yes. i saw her new last name when she wrote that she was thinking about me. She thinks we can still .. read more
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

youll heal in no time!! dont dwell on it. the more you do the more youll be down.
Crazy Cat Man

7 Years Ago

thanks. i guess i feel bad more when things dont work for me in NY. so many flakey girls here who gi.. read more
Loss is something everyone relates to. We have all lost someone close. The older you get, the more of those people you lose. I lost my brother Ricky when I was 14, then my daughter when I was 25. It's a lot like love in that it tastes different every time we experience it. It is amazing, the different facets of pain we can know. Pain is refracting light, its hues done up in different shades of hell. The pain never changes, like your others senses, it just dulls over time. Remember others know that pain, remember we are here to share in it. Remember that we are none of us alone.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

Aww thanks honey. Im really sorry about your losses...:(. you mentioned that we all experience losse.. read more
Kenneth Compton

7 Years Ago

The figurative heart is more bone than organ. It breaks, it remodels and fuses, harder than before... read more
BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

awww That is too touching. thanks for your insight and support! I love how you said when you stare i.. read more

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