RAP'N IT UP

RAP'N IT UP

A Poem by BIIKAY
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LOL I dnt know..alot of you liked my raps so I just made this for you! <3

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Hey what it do

I like big asses like moo moo moo

You dont like me?cool

F**k you your uncle and your mom too

Boo who who boo to you and your 9ft shoe

 

I'll shove it up your moo a*s

Choke you with glass watch you s**t out grass

Kix you down and punch you with my brass-

 

Knuckle and chuckle

Go ahead get up i'll beat you with my belt buckle

 

I dont play around so f**k around and see

Rip the evil devil side out of me

Feel my rath its stronger then a cheeta-zee

 

The birds fly around but the bee stings

Once I have you on the ground your gana pray for a set of wings

I know karate ---hiiiiyyaa---chiinngg--a--linnngggss

 

Get the point

Walk the streets but dont come around my joint

Get past me and you'll get a point

 

 

BIIKAY

© 2012 BIIKAY


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Nice flow of words. Rap is better spoken then on paper. Need voice and action to create life to the words. I would like to hear the words spoken. Thank you for sharing the poem. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This made me lol inside. Why you ask? Several reasons, but that first line of "big a*s" hooks me in! Write on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very funny xD thanks for making me smile.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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G!o
Lol...you're good i must admit...not plenty of girls can do this but you got it. This here reminded of one of Eminem's first freestyles...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

i APPRECIATE the feedback!!! :) plenty more to come!!!!
G!o

7 Years Ago

i am waiting....'
Ha! to funny. That's my two chief influences. Marine Corps chants and gansta rap

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

yayy!! FUN and p.s. - thanks for serving our country. very much appreciated. xo
Cool write, you have a killer style

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

LOL!! THANK YOOOOUU -o-
niselay say'ed you kan sense thee emotion within your words

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

awww ANGERRRR lol which is sooo funny bc im just a happy recently kinda sad girl so I dont know how.. read more
Michael Soul

7 Years Ago

your welcome !!

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BIIKAY
BIIKAY

NORTHROYALTON, OH



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Hey guys Im Bethany and I love to get lost in my own crazy thoughts. I love writing and I enjoy reading others work too.I'm here to enjoy I refuse to correct or critique. I will only say good things. .. more..

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