THE MEASURE OF PAIN

THE MEASURE OF PAIN

A Poem by BIIKAY
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Just thinkn...interesting how pain is so power full yet invisible...

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The measure of pain is so insane

No matter what you tell your brain

The amount of pain is still the same

It can bleed slow through every vein

Or exit fast like a traveling train

Is there a reason for pain?

I wish I could beat it with a cane

If only it could be washed away by the rain

It never goes away, like a permanent marker stain

What is there to gain going through so much pain

I guess i'll stop trying to figure out the measure of pain

because it will just drive me insane

 

BIIKAY-

© 2012 BIIKAY


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Pax
i really like the choice of words that rhymes perfectly in the end.
this made me think of pain, yes we cannot touch it because we feel it,
but we can measure it by how long it lasts. Pain is always there
its part of our everyday struggles.
great thoughts!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

ooooo I like your thinking! -but we can measure it by how long it lasts. very nice insight :))
Pax

7 Years Ago

Your welcome.



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very true and very interesting way of putting it forth. Liked it very much

Posted 7 Years Ago


good rhymes enjoyed it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice rhymes. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


There is no measurement for one's pain dear poet. It can get so deep your bones ache, or so intense that your soul grows weary... Very nice work. Thought provoking!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

aww thanks for ur wonderful insight!!
Love it!! Every line was awesome :) I'm gonna nickname ya biikay rhymes like busts rhymes hahaha :) 100!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax
i really like the choice of words that rhymes perfectly in the end.
this made me think of pain, yes we cannot touch it because we feel it,
but we can measure it by how long it lasts. Pain is always there
its part of our everyday struggles.
great thoughts!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

ooooo I like your thinking! -but we can measure it by how long it lasts. very nice insight :))
Pax

7 Years Ago

Your welcome.
I liked how you made all of the last words of your lines rhyme. It makes reading the poem a bit faster. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BIIKAY

7 Years Ago

YAY! glad you liked it...I read some poems and I honestly get lost..like totally confused,,,so i try.. read more

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Hey guys Im Bethany and I love to get lost in my own crazy thoughts. I love writing and I enjoy reading others work too.I'm here to enjoy I refuse to correct or critique. I will only say good things. .. more..

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