Party of One

To medicate or not... to allow the mania control or to behave? Welcome to my mind, today.

A coffin and a wedding march

March Hare or a Mad Hatter?
Tea party
Party of one, please

Please, please
Mother may I?

Now I lay me down to sleep
I dread what I will see

Reviews

[Clayton Bardwell]

A view of Alice down the rabbit hole. I have to think more on the first line. I'm noticing the powerful punch you put into your last lines/stanzas.

[Elizabeth]

That's my calling card, I suppose :) Thanks again for the kind words. I will return the favor tomorrow.

[Clayton Bardwell]

Until we meet again.

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool

[Matthew Kult]

Great write.

Matthew

[paul]

shockingly good. poem

[paul]

the last line makes this poem, makes this poem great

[Derek S.Keck]

You're an amazing writer; your work is so engaging and it leaves me puzzling over images and meanings for days. There seems to be this childhood, Alice like quality to your writing, and it’s deeply engaged in this nightmare like state of existence. I love your work, madness is a virtue, enough said.

[Calypso]

Nice one. Leaves you with questions.

[Crazy Cat Man]

deep and simple. im digging it :D

[darkgurl]

This is cute really, love the closing. This is wonderful

[Mr. Revan]

i don't know whether to laugh hysterically or c**k my head to the side...

regardless, its an amazing piece =)