I breathe

I breathe

A Poem by Elizabeth


cold tile is strangely comforting
when I am wearing nothing

the cracked mirror
and rivets of blood
whisper “we know what you did last night”

empty pill bottles
angry bruises


whisper, whisper, whisper

and yet,
I breathe

I see the sun through heavy drapes
and I wonder
about last night

© 2011 Elizabeth


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As I have said before, I could read you all day!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


instantly hooked at the first two lines. and stuck around for the journey through the rest, thanks for the ride

Posted 11 Years Ago


Elizabeth

11 Years Ago

Thank you for coming along with me :)
I love it because no matter what you might have done life still goes on...no matter how much you do don't want it to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You know what it is that I really like about your work? I love that its so honest and you hold nothing back that makes all the difference between so so and genius.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A moment of weakness is a naturally human condition... then we move on and live in the next moment.

Posted 12 Years Ago


the thing about cold tile is, that you feel it. stark feeling

another miraculous poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2011
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Elizabeth
Elizabeth

Wonderland, TN



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I am Alice through the looking glass...I mix my metaphors with barbiturates. I take my mania with a glass of milk and I rarely look before crossing the street. Walk a mile in my mary janes, friend. .. more..

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