I'm not from here

I'm not from here

A Poem by LadySoDivine

I'm not from here.
I feel so out of place.
I need to get lost somewhere -
Just leave without a trace.

These people around me,
They're so vile and close minded.
The things I hear every day,
I'd rather be deaf and blinded.

My mother said to me:
"Dear, your tries are in vain.
To be such a real thing in such a false place,
No wonder you're in so much pain.

You can always be like them.
It will be easy to lose your meaning.
But just look at them. Just listen.
Do you want to be a heartless being?"

I'm not from here.
I'm always out of place.
I need to leave... somewhere -
To disappear without a single trace.

© 2013 LadySoDivine


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You know, this poem holds more truth than not and it is unfortunate that society leans us in so many directions. In my opiniion, life is not supposed to be this way. You have expressed it nicely in your poem, you captured the feeling of someone who feels like an outcast. Very nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

7 Years Ago

Oh and just so you know, I am not that good of a writer, I just pretend to be. :)
LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

Well that's the beauty of it, isn't it? If we're good at pretending, we can be good at anything.
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Exactly.



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You created this in such a universal way that I think a lot of people can relate.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
We're all aliens of some sort..

Posted 7 Years Ago


LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

In this place, how could we not be...
Danilo Ašanin / RiPPJawS

7 Years Ago

Yeah :/
You know, this poem holds more truth than not and it is unfortunate that society leans us in so many directions. In my opiniion, life is not supposed to be this way. You have expressed it nicely in your poem, you captured the feeling of someone who feels like an outcast. Very nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

7 Years Ago

Oh and just so you know, I am not that good of a writer, I just pretend to be. :)
LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

Well that's the beauty of it, isn't it? If we're good at pretending, we can be good at anything.
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Exactly.
"These people around me,

They're so vile and close minded.

The things I hear every day,

I'd rather be deaf and blinded."
I like this write...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadySoDivine

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review! :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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