Unforgettable

Unforgettable

A Poem by LadySoDivine
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A little love poetry from me :) Inspired by the song of Nat King Cole "Unforgettable"

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May I tell you the things that my heart feels?
That flutter in my chest, like a wind blowing on a candle.
The clenching in my torso, that no medicine heals.
Because the feeling that you give me is unforgettable.

May I tell you how you look in my loving eye?
Like the restless sea, so untamed and beautiful.
Like a wild flower field, so magnificent, with colors that never die.
Because the image that you paint for me is unforgettable.

May I tell you how I always hear your voice?
The magical melody that makes my body tremble.
Like a thousand guitar strings that leave me with no choice.
Because the music of your speech is unforgettable.

And finally, may I tell you just how much I love you?
How I love your eyes and smile, how they make me blissful.
How the moment I met you was the moment I knew
That I finally found someone unforgettable.

© 2013 LadySoDivine


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LadySoDivine
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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I really can't forget this write. I love this piece and this's about warmth and memories that's unforgettable.
You've showed me a new mirror of writing. I've read such a piece about it by you and i loved it.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadySoDivine

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it :)
awww...this are beautiful words to tell someone, a very great poem. I have loved reading it. keep up

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Nate king Cole could sing. To be unforgettable is a wonderful place to be in and left with. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This love and warmth that I feel when reading your poems is as expected. It's great. I can't find a way to critique this. As always, you deserve a 100. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadySoDivine

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :3 I feel the same way when I read your work ^^
By the way, good luck with .. read more
Beautiful, oh to be loved like this...that would truly be unforgettable. Very nice my sweet friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadySoDivine

10 Years Ago

It is very possible with the right person, believe me, I know :)
Thank you for the kind words,.. read more

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Hi there. :) I'm an 18-year-old girl and I simply love to write. I made an account here to hear some objective opinions on my writing and to share my thoughts with fellow writers of the world. I am a.. more..

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