Until the day I die

"Come what may, I will love you until my dying day." <3

I never thought this could happen to me,

Not even in my wildest dreams

That someone could love with such grace

And turn this world into a magical place

No matter how much I deny it,

No matter how hard I try,

I will continue loving you

Until the very day I die

There's no problem we can't face,

Or hell we can't go through

Even when my life feels like a waste,

It's still heaven when I'm beside you

And whatever storm may happen,

You'll be my only star in the sky

And I will continue loving you

Until the very day I die

When I'm far away from you

It's like my soul is torn in two

Because our existence combined is like one

And I am your Moon and you are my Sun

No matter who comes in my life

My heart and feelings cannot lie

I will always love you, and only you,

Until the very day I die.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

Reviews

[Danilo Ašanin / ..]

It's as if pure emotion has turned itself into something we can touch or feel. We all have our demons. It has become a habit for me to give you compliments all the time,you know that? I want to criticize you so badly,but there is nothing to criticize on. Damn. Anyways,your style and the feelings you put in are very strong. Perfection,and a deserved 100,as usual. :)

[LadySoDivine]

Well, I'm sorry I'm perfect xD I'm kidding. Thank you for the review, your words always mean a lot :3

[Danilo A&scaron;anin / RiPPJawS]

Thanks. Also,I've got one more thing to say. Don't get me wrong but this feels familiar.

[Cassie]

This can be read out as a vow on some ones wedding day, its very nice, i loved it and will share it with my beloved. Thank you for sharing it.

[Jack...]

Absolutely gorgeous. This has so much heart and feeling, the rhymes are great, the meter is great and the poem is great. this is love my friend, this is love. Very nice LSD.

[LadySoDivine]

Thank you very much, Jack. :) I tried to follow the tips you gave me last time, I hope it worked. I'm glad you liked it.

[Jack...]

It was perfect my friend and the emotion of the piece was awesome.