Musings of the longing heart

Musings of the longing heart

A Poem by LadySoDivine

I'm too afraid to tell you how I feel. So I'll hide behind timid smiles and soft hellos.

Drinking in the sight of you
The slow burn in your eyes
I often don't know what to do
As you leave me hypnotized

I breathe in your scent
And your fragrance fogs my mind
I focus on the small fragment
Of what you could be hiding inside

Soft whispers and feather touches
That you provide leave me breathless
Timid smiles and stolen glances
Make my wild heart so restless

And you seem to come closer every time
To show me what I still cannot see
As if you try to make our lips align

or is it just me?

© 2014 LadySoDivine

Author's Note

Inspired by a wonderful blog. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing in advance!

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I enjoyed the thoughts and possibilities of the poem. Being so close and so far. No weakness in the excellent poetry.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so unbelievably beautiful. I love your work, and being able to relate to it makes me adore it even more.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely review, I really appreciate it!! :3

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Added on April 23, 2014
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