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Your Smile

Your Smile

A Poem by Sarah

Your Smile

 

The way you look into my eyes,

hurts.

Your smile,

brings tears to my eyes.

The pain of your tears,

hurt me so much.

Your smile,

lets me know you love me.

 

© 2009 Sarah


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Short sweet and to the point. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing. i get it, how two people love each other so much that they share each other's emotions. wow, that's deep.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok i read it through a few times and the smile brings pain and then it heals the pain it created? is the 1st smile of greed or lust and the second smile a caring friendfull smile?


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem! Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2008
Last Updated on January 20, 2009

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Sarah
Sarah

Sewell, NJ



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