Lonely without you...

Lonely without you...

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
















Lonely without you…





Watching this tear as it falls into lonely space,

And I wonder as it drops into life's nameless place.


Depression sets in and walks right in front of my sight,

As here I'm so lonely in darkness of this cold night.


With this much loneliness I'll never be the same again,

I may never say a word but you are not the one to blame.


It's a year and a half now but you are still on my every thought,

Every tear I held in falls, and now I can't seem to stop.


I feel so alone now that I even don't know what to do,

As I only wish... you would have taken me away with you...



© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik

Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
I wrote this poem for a friend of mine who is no more now..She left this world about a year and a half back...as she was suffering from Leukemia !
I often miss her ....

" I have tried so hard to tell myself that you are gone..But though! you are still with me...and I have been alone..all along..."

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There is so much pain inside that is invisible to the world. Sometimes the tears fall to express the grief inside but can they ever wash away all the pain...?

My answer is no.

In fact, I see the intensity increasing with every new composition of yours.
The most beautiful poetry is that which flows out of a broken heart. Your work is proof of that.

Thank you for entering it into the Lonely Contest.

Posted 15 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


"And I wonder as it drops into life's nameless place.".. my favorite line that I've heard. ever! amazing poem that can relate to any lonely day!

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is beautiful, simply beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Ah, the hardship of losing a friend. Through pain and hurt, you manage to write about her. Such a powerful piece. Amazing as usual.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pain and more pain.. such a deep poem and well done.. you have an soul of a poet... Amazing.. Magic

Posted 14 Years Ago

Oh, this is beautiful. I'm sure she smiles at you often.

Posted 15 Years Ago

oh! I'm very sorry for your friend but I'm sure wherever she is, she must be very proud of you. So don't feel sad.

Posted 15 Years Ago

This is so sad and so powerful! The love for your friend shines through beautifully in this great piece of art!!!!

Nicely written!!!!


P.S Good luck in my contest :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

truely sad...
i must say that i am sorry for your loss. i know just how much it hurts to lose one that is close to you and you have done a spectaculiar job of expressing that here. good write!

Posted 15 Years Ago

I am sorry to hear that! Toching poem! I had lost my grandma to colon cancer this last may. I know how hard it is to say good bye.

Posted 15 Years Ago

such a beautiful piece for i'm sure a beautiful person...

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 29, 2008
Last Updated on January 8, 2009


Bhavya Kaushik
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