love

love

A Poem by bhavya
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A humble thanks to the person who once made me write this., you were the reason once.:) but today I believe , I am the soul reason responsible,for my emotions have been quite strong

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My body burns in rage ,
I search for the long lost courage .
I want my love to evolve,
But its left unheard it seems.
I an in my defumed extremes,
When I walk back to you like in need of worth,
And return with this body covered in dirt.

Dreaming for a palace ,
I have fallen from the staircase.
Lost in this maze ,
Are mirrors which reflect my face ,
Those which I have to face,
Covered in my own stains.

I'm a half bloomed flower ,
Getting the sun rays with no rain droplets.
Should I smile for sun rays give me light,
Or regret for the unquenchable thirst inside.


Am I drying down with passion ?
Or am I dying with compassion ?







© 2015 bhavya


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Both passion and compassion can take a lot from us. Love can be a twisting of emotions and thoughts. I like how you described the want and need of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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They can both consume you, but with compassion it is not as happy of a place. But if you have passion, I would expect there will still be some compassion. They may walk hand in hand??? Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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bhavya

5 Years Ago

it is difficult to understand oneself..
thank you so much :)
that is very beautifully written and depicts a lot of feelings :) Good work!!

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bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you.. :)
Beautiful yet quite rebelious..impressive

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bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much.. :)
this is beautiful poem!!! love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

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bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

5 Years Ago

welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Both passion and compassion can take a lot from us. Love can be a twisting of emotions and thoughts. I like how you described the want and need of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
emotions well described, i like it

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bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Beautifully written. I absolutely love the phrase defumed extremes. You capture wonderfully the pain that sharing love with someone brings, when it goes wrong. It is not only an end foe the love, but for that part of you which shared too. The mental, as well as the physical pain these things bring.
Beautiful words on a not so beautiful feeling.

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bhavya

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it :))
alifeacoustic

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)

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