I bleed. I rise

I bleed. I rise

A Poem by bhavya
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People suffering from life threatening diseases are strong.

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I bleed. I rise.

I am born with a body of my own,and so do I have my troubles in store. 
I hear bane as a name given to me by some, 
and sympathy I seek from my family, my home. 

I cry thunders of rain every night , as I lie down to sleep, 
with nobody to hear, 
tears of pain, I weep.

I search for people, 
who'd hear me speak and not comprehend.
I realize, they who lend an ear,hesitate and fear to count me in.


Some days breathing seems a sin,  but every day, I rise. 
I make myself believe , 
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise.

© 2015 bhavya


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keep rising talented poet and break free.....fly away........soar high........
beautiful........emotional.......

if we can evolve from almost nothing cells to a complex being...........ALONE..........we need only self to evolve as a person.....human......

i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

i dont know why do some compliments make my day, passion sets you free..
people today, are .. read more
Gaurav

5 Years Ago

Hope is the word that even universe can be defined through it...when sun rise, our hope of living on.. read more
bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much.. means a lot to me :)



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Powerful and good words my friend.
"Some days breathing seems a sin, but every day, I rise.
I make myself believe ,
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise."
I like and agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Excellent work and the only one you need to count on for belief and strength for your days are you. Others are off in their own little worlds and out of jealousy call you with names. Stay strong as you have written here that you are on the right path.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much . It means a lot. :)
"Some days breathing seems a sin, but every day, I rise.
I make myself believe ,
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise".....

How often everyone feels this way... lovely poem....really a very good work.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

Thank you so Much. :)
keep rising talented poet and break free.....fly away........soar high........
beautiful........emotional.......

if we can evolve from almost nothing cells to a complex being...........ALONE..........we need only self to evolve as a person.....human......

i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

5 Years Ago

i dont know why do some compliments make my day, passion sets you free..
people today, are .. read more
Gaurav

5 Years Ago

Hope is the word that even universe can be defined through it...when sun rise, our hope of living on.. read more
bhavya

5 Years Ago

thank you so much.. means a lot to me :)

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