I bleed. I rise

People suffering from life threatening diseases are strong.

I bleed. I rise.

I am born with a body of my own,and so do I have my troubles in store. 
I hear bane as a name given to me by some, 
and sympathy I seek from my family, my home. 

I cry thunders of rain every night , as I lie down to sleep, 
with nobody to hear, 
tears of pain, I weep.

I search for people, 
who'd hear me speak and not comprehend.
I realize, they who lend an ear,hesitate and fear to count me in.

Some days breathing seems a sin,  but every day, I rise. 
I make myself believe , 
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise.

Author's Note

Let me know how you find this :)

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

keep rising talented poet and break free.....fly away........soar high........
beautiful........emotional.......

if we can evolve from almost nothing cells to a complex being...........ALONE..........we need only self to evolve as a person.....human......

i loved it!!!
:)

[bhavya]

i dont know why do some compliments make my day, passion sets you free..
people today, are actually very very selfish, pretending is an art.
You will always have to rely on yourself, and nobody else. :)
thank you for reading

[Gaurav]

Hope is the word that even universe can be defined through it...when sun rise, our hope of living one more day gets a birth...that's what your words do...

[bhavya]

thank you so much.. means a lot to me :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and good words my friend.
"Some days breathing seems a sin, but every day, I rise.
I make myself believe ,
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise."
I like and agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[bhavya]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Willard Wells]

Excellent work and the only one you need to count on for belief and strength for your days are you. Others are off in their own little worlds and out of jealousy call you with names. Stay strong as you have written here that you are on the right path.

[bhavya]

Thank you so much . It means a lot. :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"Some days breathing seems a sin, but every day, I rise.
I make myself believe ,
God is my partner in grief.
I bleed. I rise".....

How often everyone feels this way... lovely poem....really a very good work.....

[bhavya]

Thank you so Much. :)