Sweet Escape

Let me stay,

Here in my dreams

Where the trees sway

And sing beautiful songs in my ear

Where the wind softly whispers secrets in my ear

And when the rain is swiflty falling down

It tells a beautiful love story

I could lie inside myself for days

Watching my blue sky fly over me.

I can feel the rocks under my feet

With the soft current and slippery moss

I stare up into the beautiful sky

And wish upon the brightest star.

As the thunder roars and the trees sway

I dance upon the rain.

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

I love the descriptions you wrote. Very nice piece :)

[Thea]

Very beautiful imagery...A wonderfully written piece!
:)))

[_Hanabi_]

this is a really interesting piece ...keep it up!!!

[sarah]

This is such a beautiful write! it is peaceful and it flows like a small stream :-) great write I really enjoyed this and thank you so much for your kind review :-)