Who I am

Who I am

A Poem by Brook Hughes

Here as I sit, the days go by
Not one cloud fills the sky
I sit in my cell with a bed and chair
I look out the window with a cold hard stare
Watching as cars go by
Wondering why I never tried
I struggle and push till i'm put in the car
As I sit behind these rusty old bars
I think about the choice I've made
Knowing consequences have to be paid
I sit knowing the poem gets longer
Knowing that after I will be stronger
Trying to find people to blame
Knowing the offender is still the same
Acting like someone I will never be
Knowing that the offender is me.

© 2012 Brook Hughes


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Woaw , I really like your poem ! Short , simple and yet so beautiful . I like some sentences here like '' Trying to find people to blame '' ans '' Acting like someone I will never be '' . Goob job .

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is a sad poem. but it was really good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm a big fan of rhyme, I must say I enjoyed this
very much. It all fit together perfectly and so
melancholic...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow, I can feel some sort of sadness in here, I really enjoyed this poem very much, keep up the good work ^_^b

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Brook Hughes
Brook Hughes

Viroqua, WI



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Hi:) So... my name is Brook Hughes. I have 2 middle names Ashley and Ann. I live in good old Wisconsin. My social security number is 33562. LMFAO!!!!! jk jk. Anyways i love animals.... I would like t.. more..

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A Poem by Brook Hughes