You make my life beautiful

You make my life beautiful

A Poem by Bidya Jyoti Palai
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Two persons realise their love finally when both of their eyes reveals their secret crush for each other..☺

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"Darling you are my beautiful story;
I am going to tell to everyone.
When everyone makes you an option
Our love makes it a beautiful life..!!"


Broken heart with a hoping mind,
When she swifts right into my heart♡♡
Making all the affairs to be vacant
And makes it only for the one !!


Deeper we look, more secrets revealed;
Only lips moves , words expressed through eyes..,
Unaware of the surroundings;
We look deeper, when we realise
"Yes We Do" !! ♡♡

© 2016 Bidya Jyoti Palai


Author's Note

Bidya Jyoti Palai
Its my another attempt to get love from you people so please do review wheather good or bad ...I will try my best possibility to reach to your hearts ♡ ♡

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This is a great way of expressing love realized in a very sweet way.

I have some wording ideas (I always seem to want to remove words from people's poems. Also all suggestions are only suggestions).
Deeper we look, more secrets revealed
Only lips move, words expressed through eyes

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Bidya Jyoti Palai

3 Years Ago

Thankyou!! S.Mi for your suggestion..I have changed the lines ☺☺



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Deeper we look, more secrets revealed;
Only lips moves , words expressed through eyes..,
Unaware of the surroundings;
We look deeper, when we realise
"Yes We Do" !! ♡♡

Nice lines. Yes love really makes life beautiful and colorful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful, I enjoyed your second stanza a lot.
Amazing write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last stanza is golden. The whole poem is beautiful, but the beginning of the last stanza is rich! Tyfs!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Bidya Jyoti Palai

3 Years Ago

Thankyou dear for your review☺☺
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome!
Eyes speak better than words at times. And the eyes don't lie.Nicely written

Posted 3 Years Ago


Well for a dull Monday, I like it, not enough love going around these days.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet.I enjoyed reading it ! Thank you for sharing !!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bidya Jyoti Palai

3 Years Ago

Thankyou!! Zaisham for your review😊
The words that are expressed through eyes can only be felt by heart and can never be explained by speech..great work

Posted 3 Years Ago


Bidya Jyoti Palai

3 Years Ago

Thankyou!!! Ayushi ♡ ♡
Smiles yes we sure do:) Great writing:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. He subtle way that love is realized. Nicely written. Great imagery and flow.
I enjoyed how simple and sweet it is. You have done very well. Keep up the great work. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bidya Jyoti Palai

3 Years Ago

Thankyou Sammie for your lovely nd encourage review ..♡♡☺☺

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Bidya Jyoti Palai
Bidya Jyoti Palai

kolkata, West Bengal, India



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I am a free minded girl..I love to roam around the world .I have a keen intrst to know people all over the world their language,culture,habits,etc. more..

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