Into The Sky........

a love poem.....

The clouds in the sky form a vision of her. And as they float by, it becomes a blurr.

Where did she go, where could she be; only if my heart had eyes, then maybe it could see.

See that she’s here, walking by my side. And I scream out my love, for that I don’t hide

 My eyes are wide open, as I look back at the sky, and I ask the lord above, to tell me why

  Why did you send an angel, to capture my heart, all the way to the center, the most important part?

I watch for clouds, to show me her face, and they shower me with rain, to take her place

 

Author's Note

flying high in love....

Reviews

[Gypsy Dreamer]

heartfelt and beautifully written.

[Poeticme]

Thank you for stopping in and reading my piece, I appreciate it

Poeticme

[Gypsy Dreamer]

You're welcome.

[Emily L]

Just beautiful. Really beautiful. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem is perfect, it all flows together so well. This is one of those poems you just have to read over and over again to admire it's beauty. Wonderful job, i absolutely loved it!

[Poeticme]

Thank you for your kind and lovely words on this piece. Yes I am quite the hopeless romantic, feel free to read more of my written as you have time, I'd enjoy the feedback

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Dude, this was something else. First off, I love the color thing youve got going on, that was awesome and then the imagery it painted, bravo on this man

[Poeticme]

Appreciate that bro,..yeah I get lost in the moment when I'm in my zone. A love poet I am, glad you liked it my man

Poeticme

[Tiana]

Moving poetry that really touched me! Beautifully penned ... :)

[Poeticme]

Thank you so much for your kind words...glad my poetry moved you my lady

Poeticme

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I watch for clouds, to show me her face, and they shower me with rain, to take her place"

This line really captured my heart!
I loved the feel this piece creates in the reader. Nicely penned 👍

[MsJewel]

There is a soft, dreamy like feel to your words...almost as if floating - or as you said, flying high in love. Stunning poetry :) Julie

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

this is sweet and full of love - nice to read and nice to imagine it being such a free and happy thing :) Good word use. Made me smile and say - that's nice

[Deandra Dawn]

You created beautiful imagery, it was soft, delicate and almost quiet. Rhyming was outstanding and it flows really well. Nicely done.

[Samuel Dickens]

What a romantic softee! It sounds like you've got it bad---ah, but that's how we are. Nice imagery and comparisons.

[poetforlife]

Awe, so passionate and soulfull. I love how you pray for the rain to wash down on you. Almost like it's making you feel her presence. Lovely piece, brother. Glad to see you writing again. I miss you.