Breaking of the Angel

 

 

Sodom so loud

Lock and key

Demonic destiny

Writhe within the bail

 

Sound lone

Stumble ‘neath the bark

Dirty angel

Scarred the glass

Ash in mouth

Tooth and nail

Scalding the horn!

 

Taming the innocence

Ravaging wings

Star dust torn

A tear unfurling

 

Purity awash with the remnants

The damage of the act

Treason of trust

Leaving the angel

Disheveled, decrepit, alone  

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Wonderful rhyme scheme with a thought provoking subject.

An innocent robbed before her time. So sad this happens and scars one for life.

Nice write!

[Lucinda Bogart]

Innocence corrupted, cannibalized, and ultimately abandoned by the puss covered scabs of humanity who deserve nothing less than to live in their own sewers and be eaten alive by the rats they've become.

[Andromeda]

wow, the rhythm in this went perfect w/ the theme/story. great job!