I can't see....

I can't see....

A Poem by Kayla W.

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When I tried to see the good in the world

I couldn’t

When I tried to make a change they said

“I shouldn’t”


They told me since I didn’t like what I saw

To just take out my eyes

So I did and they were right

To my surprise


I don’t see a thing

No bad and no good

I wish I didn’t do it

But I knew I should


I’m the only one that thought it

And now I think like them

I showed them how evil I could be

But they said it was a sin


So now, I am eyeless

I can’t see a thing

I can’t see the positives or negatives

I can’t see the bling


They locked me this building

And told me to wrap my eyes

They told me to keep my mouth shut

So the kids can’t hear my cries


When I’m done, I hope they let me out

Even though I still can’t see

At least I won’t be trapped

At least I will be free

© 2010 Kayla W.

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i agree wit dutch jr...but very good writing hunni

Posted 11 Years Ago

its odd and different from everything else i read. very unique. good write

Posted 11 Years Ago

Gooood writing. I like the rhyming, except in the second stanza. When I read this poem, I think of that saying "See no evil."

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on April 25, 2010
Last Updated on April 27, 2010
Tags: sad, hurt, trapped, beat, stomped, other


Kayla W.
Kayla W.

Nashville, TN

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