Are you ready?

I don't know if this is considered a poem?

It is the delicate delicious way in which your name slides from my tongue,

flowing into passionate pools of melody, waning whispers to stifled screams each time your name passes my lips,

 I swear that I can taste you, feel you, love you.

Reviews

[Luke L]

oo lovely! Beautifully erotic :)

[Elizabeth Sellito]

thanks:)

[Luke L]

you're very welcome, check out some of my writing as well if you like, but fair warning it's mostly very dirty

[Elizabeth Sellito]

i think i can handle it.... trust me. i know more than i should

[Luke L]

you know more than you should? haha who taught you those things? :p I think most people can I just like to give that warning anyways, I don't want people to get mad at me like I sprung that on them by surprise or something :p

[Elizabeth Sellito]

i love to read.. so i know a lot. i thanked the gods the day i turned 18.

[Matt Millsaps]

Very nice! I am very happy with your repetitive use of alliterations. I look forward to seeing what else you may develop

[Elizabeth Sellito]

thank you!!