Visited One Night

100 words of dialogue.

     "You are so beautiful when you are asleep."
     "You've never told me that."

     "There's a lot of things I should have told you, I realize that now....."
     "Honey, I have always loved you for you."
     "Do you know that your happiness has always been the most important thing to me?"
     "Yes."
     "I won't be visiting again. This man you are marrying has a pure heart. He loves you deeply and will always take care of you. You have made a good choice."
     "Oh..."
     "Shhhhhh... my time grows short but my love with live on through you. Sweet dreams, my darling."

 

 

Author's Note

Can you tell who is who?

Reviews

[Jim Clarke]

This makes me think of peter pan and wendy. Whether I am right or wrong, your writing has a fairy tale quality.

Please give my fairy tale a read. I think you will enjoy it.

[Jet Lag]

--good choose
did you mean choice?

thanks for submitting and good luck!

[Phil Sanders]

You and your mother (or father)?