Reply to my Sister

A letter to my Sister :)

A flying-horse!
A rainbow connecting the stars!
With you, the Force!
And a rocket to the Mars!
A Wish for you...
And let me see you fly!

Leap of the Bungee,
And Jump of the Zorro!
Aye Brave and beautiful,
Thou spring off the sorrow!
Let me watch you propel!

Melody of the Heart,
And Colors of the Life!
The vibrating twines,
That's spiraling alike!
Melody n music, that
With them you sing!

Like a fish you swim,
Like a dolphin dive!
Like a Ship of air
You float the wave!

Chase the Big Dipper in the sky,
Act the Adventure of the Life!
And Crazy to do All Nonsense.
So as Brave to power the No-Nonsense!























And do not worry the troubles
For that's a passage!
Be assured I'll be, for any help,
And Listen to the Heart when it says!
Love to see you blossom into thyself!


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NOTE: In response to this poem by my sister -

Aspire to fly high in the open sky,
Aspire to jump from High Mountain,
Aspire to sing aloud,
Aspire to swim across the pacific,
Aspire to ride on roller coaster,
Aspire to travel to the center of the earth,
Aspire to do all Nonsense,
Aspire to do all No-Nonsense,
Aspire to be what the Heart says,
Aspire! Aspire! Aspire!
Aspire to remain what I am………

Reviews

[Lorraine]

You have an epic way of telling a poem. Every line seems to be dripping of adventure and bouncing off the screen. Your piece is one of inspiration and motivation that truly is meaningful not just for your sister but for me as well. Very nice response. I just feel the love so strongly in both your sister's poem and your reply.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Ali_Avery~7]

Hey! Great poem and response :} I love the inspirational quality here, especially in this line:

...Aye Brave and beautiful,
Thou spring off the sorrow!
Let me watch you propel!

That's neat stuff
-QG

[Simple_mee]

A very good gift to ur sis. I loved it. Ur sisters response was very wonderful too.
Ur choice of words was great.
U do a good job with the pen :)
Thanks for sharing !!

[maryjaneuy]

very descriptive. i think you had a nice choice of words. hope you can read my poem, "a great confidant". that's also for my sis. :D

[Cassandra D.]

The fourth stanza was pretty interesting.
The first line of the 6th stanza, you had forgotten to space out "do" and "not"
Other than that little mistake, everything else seemed very nice.