I see You, can feel You!

I see You, can feel You!

A Poem by Nayan

Where thou search for thy creator? He is here and there... and everywhere!

In the Sky of Heaven,
In the Rainbow Path,
In the Twinkling Stars, 'n
In the Moon n the Mars -

I see You, can feel You
In the Wind of Spring!
I see You, can feel You
In those Beautiful Wings!


In the Green Leaves,
In the Yellow Flowers,
In the Orange Dawn, n
In the Red Bees -

I see You, can feel You
In the Brown Hut!
I see You, can feel You
In the Rusty Peace!


In the Chirping Birds,
In the Dancing Kids,
In the Flowing River, n
In the Cloud n Mist -

I see You, can feel You
In the Music of Thee!
I see You, can feel You
In the Laughter of Me!

8:25 AM IST.....................
Friday, 7th August, 2009...
My room, Hyderabad, India

© 2010 Nayan

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So true. I also believe His presence is everywhere, even in the littlest and most insignificant parts of the world. Great imagery and wonderful flow as usual. Your words are elegant and soothing, fitting to describe the presence of He who is divine.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is amazing!
Such an enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago

lol, I thought this was pretty great!

Posted 10 Years Ago

what a joyful noise! it's beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago

A beautiful poem. I like the use of nature and your description. A excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on February 1, 2010
Last Updated on February 11, 2010
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Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh, India

Hello, I am Nayan from India. I love Poetry, Philosophy, Photography and Music; and want Goodwill to mankind! I get astonished every moment at the marvels of science and space... Let me travel.. more..


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