then you will see me bleed

dark poem

Then you will see me bleed

 

My pain is my pleasure

For it is my only treasure

Growing inside like a cancer

An open wound to fester

Push the blade in my heart

Then you will see me bleed

There’s no escaping my pain

You may not see the strain

Tears fall in showers of rain

You may wonder if im sane

Push the blade in my heart

Then you will see me bleed

I don’t want your sympathy

In your eyes I see your apathy

There is only one thing for me

Open up my veins and be free

Push the blade in my heart

Then you will see me bleed

Reviews

[Pauline Ramsey]

Excellent use of imagery and the conviction of the story within the words is well written. Thanks for sharing!

[Amanda]

good writing. i feel the pleasure of the pain, the blade going in...i know, i like the feelings.

good job.

Amanda =)))

[Kenneth Hunt]

I like this it reminds me, one of my good friends. Thank you for bringing back the memories.