Poem- Where is my mind

Poem- Where is my mind

 

My mind is soaking

In the bottom of a bottle

Full of blithe

In attempt to revive

A kiss off to all

Foreboding feelings

As they slowly die

Energy increases to take

Over the controls

Of this ride

Holding on for dear life

To fight back a slide

Too much time already spent

On the other side

The thoughts that I fear

Carry gifts that were not asked for

In an attempt to connive

And to try to get back into my life

But gifts ignored

I continue to rise

My self stitched suit finally

Fits just right

Ever more comfortable

Impeccable in its style and size

Author's Note

I have not been on here in a long time. I spend most of time on my blog www.blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com. Stop by any time. As always thanks for reading.

Reviews

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

this write got me a bit at first and a good grove to it my friend its dam good to see ya here again cheers stay crazy

[seaNobody]

interesting summation on how we dive and rise through moments of mental suffering and relief! Interesting rhythm and rhyme.