A Poem by Blake<3

Everything about you makes me smile.

The way you look at me.

When you say something.

You make my heart skip a beat.

I'm safe when I'm with you.

I know no matter what happens I'll always have your shoulder to cry on.

For that, I shall give you my heart.

I trust that you will never break it.

I love you.<3

© 2009 Blake<3

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You are a talented word artist that can go from the depths of darker thoughts..."Your Name"... to the lighter side of appreciating love. Good to see that the pen is free to move from one venue to another. Keep exercising that skill.

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice and smooth....It's like I really really really like you and I believe that you will appreciate that...wink wink...I LOVE IT!!! NICE!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is such a sweet and romantic piece. I love the lines:
"The way you look at me.
When you say something."
I know that feeling, it is a great feeling and you convey that perfectly here. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Blanky, this is soo beautiful! people can relate to this soo easily! You are such a great writer and put a lot of thought into it! Great job babe!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beuatiful and wonderful,
very well written too!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. Sometimes when you see someone it just clicks, and this really captures love at first sight well. :-D

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 5, 2009



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