Your name.

it's alright.

 will you please pick up that razor

and sign your name into my arm

so the world knows

who made me like this

I want the whole world to know

Who made me who I am today

As I watch the crimson drip down my arm

I wish you would've just signed my arm.

 

Reviews

[Lizanne]

Accept the reponsibility of all the misery and sign your name to it for the world to see. Self inflicted wounding or a "you did it, now step up and own it" statement. Deep and thought provoking writing. Your pen flows with the emotional blood of dark ink in this writing. Many will be able to relate to this work in different ways. Keep your pen moving, it has much to say.

[Undying Glory]

really good. imagery is top-notch, so much so i couldn't help but wince at the first two lines. a bit masochistic but still great

wow intense blake....... ummmmm idk what to say other then it shows your evil side.... lol

OK. I am now all teary-eyed. This doesn't just talk about how sad it is for the person, but it also talks about how he/she has to go through with life, feeling the pain, and showing the world.

[Emily?]

Blake, this is so beautiful. It makes me want to cry. Very powerful words, coming together to form a very beautiful story! Amazing job!