soon

Time is the barrier between us,

I am busy with work and studies,

I am really sorry for that,

I want to be with you.

I really want to.

 

But my schedule is really

Something else,

It is as if a day is not enough

To complete my tasks

And more to come.

 

I wish I can have a

Spare day to share with you,

To enjoy a wonderful moment with you,

And I really hope it can come to that.

Hopefully very soon….

 

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Everything has its own time and life’s demands are always so great. How to balance it all? Your eloquent, touching and honest poem expresses this so well sette, and shows how much you care about the other person. I hope you two keep the communication going, any way you can. Sharing and caring are so important. I know you will do the best thing for yourself. Good luck my friend.

[sette]

thanks for the encouragement and appreciation

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very interesting and thought provoking wordplay. Sometimes our fast paced environment leads to missed opportunities. Must guard against - mind you therr is Whatsapp or Skype haha - good write and enjoyable read ... :-)

[sette]

thanks phil for the wonderful review

[Krizito]

i like that the beautiful things are the simplest. and i find that sometimes we just have the forgo n hope for that moment, and live it, jump into it and be crazy about it. the world would still be there, boring as ever when we're giddy and done.
but then I'm lazy, and not much a fan for the work. the Living i find better appealing. i like your poem, nice piece.

[sette]

thanks very much for the wonderful review

[Yousra Alsubaihi]

It's really fact , I like it .

[sette]

thanks for dropping by and the wonderful review

[Yolanda Cee]

excellent display of emotion and desire l hope you get time to do what you ought to do

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful review

[Ranger Kessel]

Very nice I am glad to find this. it is sweet. I like the clock

[sette]

thanks for the insight and the review

[Eiram]

Siguro naman po maunawain siyang tao kaya mauunawaan niya kayo, importante rin naman kasi iyon mga gagawin o ginagawa ninyo.

[sette]

opo sana nga maunawaan pa niya

[Coyote Poetry]

Time is our most valuable thing we control. Old wisdom. Do one thing you like daily. Time with family and friends. Is hard regret to miss if we work and no play. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sette]

thanks my friend for a very insightful review

[GregoryM]

Nice. Sometimes a person's gotta do what a person's gotta do.

[sette]

yes i agree to that

[Stella Armour]

being honest is much better than find weak excuses... :)

[sette]

yes definitely honesty is still the best choice