Tears and screams

Tears and screams

A Poem by Sweet Little Bunny

In the night of the full moon
the young child cried
he lost everything in that fire
his family,his home,his life.
they had past on,he had stayed
He screamed at himself for not going with them
The years would pass
He would stay
untouched by time
at the tender age of 14
People would come and go
all he could do was watch
he cried for a new life
he screamed for his family
He cried when Satan's evil hands grabbed him
he screamed when they dragged him to Hell

© 2011 Sweet Little Bunny


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It tells such a sad story-- but it's very good!
It's powerful and touching and just.. it's very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very insightful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was very interseting, and very well put together :}

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this was a very touching piece :)
I really enjoyed it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful, the last two lines, just wow. "He cried when Satan's evil hands grabbed him He screamed when they dragged him to hell". Powerful, strong, this is an emotional poem here. The others here are correct about it being sad. The imagery of the crying, the people passing, it's like I can see him sitting while people walk by without seeing him, the years passing, like a slow motion, music-playing part of a movie. this was pretty good, i can visibly and physically feel his pain.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Can I come out from hiding under the bed now, good poem ; )

Posted 13 Years Ago


sad but verry good

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad, but i like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


LURVES IT :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2011
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Sweet Little Bunny
Sweet Little Bunny

Trying to find my place in this world~, NC



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I'm that kind of person who smiles each day to hide the pain. I love Blood On The Dance Floor and Black Veil brides. SGTC~ more..

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