Wonder

um.... just read please!

Sometimes I wonder whats it's like to fly

to be in the sky with the birds

is it bold? free? scary? or amazing?

I wonder what it's like to swim with the dolphins

Is it powerful? or is it suffocating?

I wonder what it's like to be my Best friend

Hurting?loving? regretful? or unforgetful?

I wonder so many things.

My brain is always imagining

But the one thing I will always wonder.....

Is why I wonder about all these things.

Author's Note

Pretty random. So tell me what you think! ^^

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Random, yes, but also it fills the mind wiht image after image as to guide the readr, dramlike and expansive, well done, good read.

[StoryTailor]

Well-- thoughts aren't always patterned are they?
I think that was definitely shown. So yeah, it might've been random.... but that worked here. If you understand.

I wonder about things a lot too!
^^
Liked the poem a bunch-- great job.

[Groovy]

And this is a breathless poem. It conveys so well a beautiful excitement.

[NinjaPi]

it is random but that is whats good about it. it gives the feeling of sparatic thought but it shows intention in how well its writen. great write

[Tsuki Kyori]

awww, so sad. Reminds me of all the times I randomly put thoughts into words ^^
It's a short poem, but I can see that you are a deep thinker. It's truly true, thinking about those kinds of things can sometimes be hurting but all in all we each have a reason why we do.

[✪Miki-chanϪ..]

This is great :)

[Lily Mae]

Wonder keeps us alive and willing to live life to the fullest. So I think it's perfect..x

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

Some times I wonder what it's like to die alone o.o