She Loves Rain

A poem that doesn't have to do with rain, but it is written by someone (me) who loves rain~ It's also a story that is very close to my heart <3

Spent from a day of lonely,
Sitting in this corner I rest--
Screaming from the inside and
Splitting the ears of the caring.

Here they cannot hear.
How painful it is to realize…
Hits me like a sharpened stone--
How much I am alone.

Eternal sorrow cries within
Every pore; I let it sink.
Each day is another breakdown--
Empty and broken-- I cry for help.

Love is filled with lies.
Living is nothing to me.
Lift the blade to a bare neck;
Let it slice through soft skin.

Oh! The hero grabs a hand.
Opens his heart to a girl.
Offers his love to her gently.
Obliterates the darkness inside.

Visions of the future brighten.
Vitality is restored to emptiness.
Vacationing from a broken mind is
Very good for her depression.

Each morning she remembers
Every ounce of kindness he gives,
Entertains her thoughts with his smile…
Even smiles with the happiness inside.

Softened heart and bright lights.
She feels the warmth in herself.
Smiles come easy to her face.
Shining-- she is beautiful.

Rising from the darkness,
Angels sing their songs of love
Igniting the fire within her heart
Never to enter sadness again.

Author's Note

Please critique to the best of your ability!