Edging true risk

Edging true risk

A Poem by Blindmikey

Inspired by a man I saw walking on the road-edge of a long spacious sidewalk.


2    He walked

3    on the edge

4    out of the way

4    so close to harm

4    as if to show

3    that in his

4    humility

3    therein lie

2    his risk

2    his life

© 2008 Blindmikey

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I'm curious about the numbers. Syllables: I get that much lol. Anyways, I admire your observance of such little, every day things. Whatever your reasoning behind the structure of this poem, I enjoy it.

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