A Poem by NamoI_asassin

something i just felt


Ever felt like you're stuck?
The world has its pleasures,
while you suffer.
The world keeps revolving and you're stuck.

Feeling misery day night.
Never able to smile,
because you're worthles.
to everyone else?

You have always been capable of
doing great things to the world,
but you feel worthless.

Stuck in the middle of
everyone else's ,

© 2008 NamoI_asassin

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Love it love it love it love it love it love it!!!!!!!!
Its how I feel sometimes.....

Posted 14 Years Ago

Simply beautiful! a feeling that sweeps through humanity on a daily basis finds a way to blossom here in your words!

WE the people of the masses, are always finding ourselve stuck in the dark shadows of those large mega personalities high above. That's when i find a isolated beach and build sandcastles that are of my own imagination.

Great Poem!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 14 Years Ago

Other than that typo (worthles) in the 7th line, this is well crafted. Very raw and accusatory to the world.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 9, 2008



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