New Generation

New Generation

A Poem by BLitZeD

rollin down the block with the windows down,

heater cranked up wid a clip full of rounds,

pull a Old Yeller  put the old dog down

blow a fat blunt then blow up the town

listen to the sound a this M16,

thats my version of the american dream,

people run an scream, hide duck cover,

lock up the doors pull down the shutta.

new dog same tricks scream mask face cover, blood shed orange red no head call um fread,

last name Flintstones im stoned to death,

all heart no fear im throwin lead,

knight wid out his armor hes a shinein mess /

no Kevlar pig bled to death

hail a hollow tips let loose in his chest

mail the proof of purchase send my fukin best

no i meant regards got no regrets,

f**k a royal guard id rather pet,

my loyal dog now go bite his neck,

tear an rip the flesh eternal rest,

eternal rest

© 2017 BLitZeD


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new dog same tricks scream mask face cover, WORDPLAY.. see my problem here is that every time I read your work, I go in music mode.. rocking and chilling like that's dope. I also click the youtube links you leave that go to your words.. I will not express this enough get you a laptop and RECORD! lol when you start doing that, you will never stop . you need to build you an audience based off your flow.. great work,

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

3 Years Ago

I got your inbox and thanks, @above
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

Its spam dnt fall for it
silent poet

3 Years Ago

Lmfao ok got it



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The darkness is strong with this one, but the awesomeness is also strong with this one. Your writing style is unique and creates an epic narrator who narrates this dark but also truthful story.

Good job :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


new dog same tricks scream mask face cover, WORDPLAY.. see my problem here is that every time I read your work, I go in music mode.. rocking and chilling like that's dope. I also click the youtube links you leave that go to your words.. I will not express this enough get you a laptop and RECORD! lol when you start doing that, you will never stop . you need to build you an audience based off your flow.. great work,

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

3 Years Ago

I got your inbox and thanks, @above
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

Its spam dnt fall for it
silent poet

3 Years Ago

Lmfao ok got it
I almost said imagine if this was the way of life here... but in many areas it is. A darker side of life but some have no choice but to resort to violence to maintain life. An honest write about a crazy side of life... good job :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

thanks buddy
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