Intensity (work in progress)

Intensity (work in progress)

A Poem by BLitZeD
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still working on the rest

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I miss the intensity that these drugs bring to me
inside the beast listens as the demons sing to me
dark armies march, a sign of the king i'm to be
Mayans chart, minds marked, 3rd eye blind, Noah cant step to me
Aztecan, legendary Arc, The Convenient, has revealed i see
the power in which Mosses used to part the Red Sea 

© 2015 BLitZeD


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BLitZeD
still working on the rest

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I miss the intensity that these drugs bring to me
inside the beast listens as the demons sing to me
dark armies march, a sign of the king i'm to be
Mayans chart, minds marked, 3rd eye blind, Noah cant step to me
Aztecan, legendary Arc, The Convenient, has revealed i see
the power in which Mosses used to part the Red Sea
bleeding out is a way that’s considered chivalry
because the power of the drug is consuming me
beyond this is insanity
waiting till it kills me
because this is consuming me
erasing me from history

Posted 3 Years Ago


In my opinion, nothing more is required. It's an excellent piece of brevity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


"I miss the intensity that these drugs used to bring forth,
My inner beast is not to listen to the demons as they sing chords,
Dark armies march, let me show you what a kings worth,
Mayans gold, Tired and old, still up to battle those who swing swords,
Tlaloc couldn't drown me out, Xerxes sent one million plus,
I'll split the sea and crash it down, Moses, fourteen, Exodus,
The power's like a high, I swear It's like a rush,
I feel it flowing through my veins as if it was the kush,
Lightning bolts from zeus' hands claiming you're a god,
You shouldn't let a mortal expose your damn facade,
So step to me I dare you, meet me in the centre ring,
A blacksmith in my own regard, I use my hands for everything"

Got mail from Dopest and it linked me right here. It's a great start to a great concept. This is where I would go with it or how I perceive to finish it. Cheers.

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

that was sick bro, very nice
Lew God

3 Years Ago

agreed immensely
youngkingkwan

3 Years Ago

Thanks for letting me run with the concept.
This is good it is intense

Posted 3 Years Ago


epic still... ... love the wording

Posted 4 Years Ago


BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

epicly love u lol
silent poet

4 Years Ago

Lol 😍 miss you MMM..

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