A Challenge is Rare *Dead Scribe & BLitZeD*

A Challenge is Rare *Dead Scribe & BLitZeD*

A Poem by BLitZeD
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"Look At Me Now" Responded Version

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A Challenge Is Rare

**BLitZeD**
Look at me now/
A crook, wonder how/
They stand and stare, so shook of me, wow/
Wont roar ill just growl/
Let um soar to the ground/
An oxymoron and proud/
An oxy w***e on my sound/
Rough night on the town/
Pour out the bars, I wish you'd get loud/
A god from the clouds/
Witnessed a lot of you now/
The potential is there, but my words keep you bound/ 
Maybe its mental, out rips the hair/
So ill try and push you, into a star if you dare/
What I say is kush dude, take a chair in my lair/
A new challenge is welcomed/ 
but a challenge is rare//


**Dead Scribe**

You call it a challenge, I call it a dare, but the s**t is out of balance, I would barely call it fair, potato to tomato the two just don't compare, this ain't no f****n battle, cuz you caught me unprepared... You call it a challenge... You call a challenge rare, I'm writing out of passion from the love of my despair, the money I can't ration, the life I can't repair, the life I never had cuz my life was never there... Like I said before, you and me just can't compare, what's an apple to an orange, what's an orange to a pear... See I see you like a brother, showed me love and showed me care, don't ever forget all the memories we have shared.

**BLitZeD**

Whats an apple to an orange? a recipe for disaster and carnage, a global catastrophe harnessed, a renaissance masterpiece tarnished, Ill have mashed potatoes, i covered the tomatoes in varnish,.

Free samples from the pharmacist , herbs and spices, pills and tabs, my turn im writing, chiseling on concrete slabs, caps and dabs, wet im high, slight relapse, cats to dogs, night to rain, dense fog falls, ill match on what ever he has 

As sure as green cash, up to bat for my family, balls out the park a concept few grasp, so to you I bow my head and clap, 

Out of respect , out of love, out of the acropolis crumbling watching Conan smoking my bud

© 2015 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
Dead Scribe-- http://www.writerscafe.org/Tesuroh

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this title alone is sick!! love it off top gave me chills , ready for anything kinda feel. the way you two bleed together is rare! i love every part of this script by script! 110% a page turner all on one page ache after ache deep and beautiful, different and wonderful, great fukn work guys!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

::))))))))))))))
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you my dear, and that blending has been going on since 7th grade , so plenty of time to practi.. read more
I loved how there was so much passion. You could tell you guys were into what you were writing.


Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

since the day we met lol
great job on this both of you. like everything ive read of yours so far, blitzed, and dead scribe ima check out some of your poems soon. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

ty much sir
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dan
Blitzed, WOW, now I'm definitely a flat-out FAN. This is some of the best writing I've seen in a while. And you top that by having it end with 'smoking my bud,' which is NEVER a good thing. You should be published, you should be performing. Your talent is rare Use it well. take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

thanks man , always encouraging
dan

4 Years Ago

What I meant was if someone was "smoking MY bud," it would not be good. MY bud is MY bud. 58 years o.. read more
I'm ready for the next round. Let's get this poppin. Rawness on display. Magical beats with the words that you lay. Let's keep this party going, that sick rythm flowing. This ain't no mic drop yet. The stage is set. Come on let's go round 3 fo sho.

Posted 4 Years Ago


BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

beat the bass to the floor, while the treble trembles and roars/tremmors galore acompanied by mass r.. read more
BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

....last word shoulda been ignored, sounds better lol
Sultrysoul

4 Years Ago

I like devoid. Feelin it for real though. I got sick beats in my head when you drop them lines. I'm .. read more
I really liked it!
Keep it up!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


A Challenge is Rare indeed Mr. BLITZED"
Such a vibrant write you have here..
Are we going for our Round 3?
If we are, then by all means lets proceed"
Thanks for Sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


BLitZeD

4 Years Ago

when ever u want bro
Such raw talent here
I would steer away from profanity though

Other than that
i love the feeling of a challenge strolling across all the lines

Very unique

Posted 4 Years Ago


They stand and stare, (is present tense) so shook of me, (is past tense).
This is very interesting, avant-garde to say the least. Fresh views from a different prospective in an creative style is always exciting to read, not only for newness but for the inspiration as well. Nicely done :~)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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